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Alice and Miyu by JECBrush Alice and Miyu by JECBrush
Finally, it's done (or at least I think so)! Here is a commish for :iconjabariboykin:~Jabariboykin. Her OC Alice and Miyu having a romantic dinner at the coastline on Corneria.

I wanted to study atmospheric lighting up a bit before I was happy with the end result. I personally think lighting techniques were improved as a result and will most certainly set the bar for future sessions. Tis' not perfect, but it's good. :)

Interpret your own story, if you dare! Hope ya'll like it!

Character Alice belongs to ~Jabariboykin
Star Fox & Lylat Wars Nintendo
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The characters are really beautiful and well rended! Her poses, hair, faces and fluffy ears are great ! I specially like the details of the hands and the clothes. I just think Alice's hand and elbow are a bit small. The Miyu's shoulder is too low and too far from her body, but I really like the sharp you gave it ! The perspective of Miyu's ears is well rended but the right one should be smaller considering the perspective.
I must say the dresses are amazing. They are elegant, sexy and correspond to the characters. The folds are well done too !

The background is absolutely beautiful ! The colours are perfect and the sky is impressive ! I always loved in your style that we see the brush's texture but it is still clean and smooth anyway.
But it is too symmetric; the characters are already centered themselves, there is no need to do the same with the background.

The scene is very romantic, the table is great and full of details, this is really looks like they have a wonderful time ! I can easy imagine this restaurant on Corneria even if there are not any elements from the Star Fox universe (Miyu aside of course).
The render of the candle is amazing, you perfectly done the lighting and this flame is wonderful !
The petals looks too flattened, it would have been nice to give them different forms and a visible shadow. The forks are a little to small but the plate looks nice with all this details on it.
The characters's shadow is nice but it looks flat too. If the sun is at the center of the scene, this shadow must be more flared. It would be nice to darken it too.
The Miyu's left hand is beautiful but its pose disturbs the perspective, it looks like the table is in vertical. It should be more flatted or just show the middle phalanges.
The wall behind the characters is really beautiful but it seems too close; I doubt they can move back their chairs and leave after this wonderful dinner.

To conclude, this is an amazing and colorful piece of art, a great fanart with an incredible ambiance. I will watch it very often !
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Nin10dohgirl Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014
:omg:OK, that's just scary--I can't believe the pic here made me think of it, let alone that I'm even saying it now, but......Err, *starts blushing a little* I......kinda had a dream like this, only with......*clears my own throat* FoxXKrystal, SlippyXAmanda, * can't help fidgeting* BillXFay, KoolXKatt, myself, and......*face turning red* Falco......All of us are......pretty much out for dinner, basically like a group date......I'm, honestly not sure which Star Fox Hero likes what type(s)of food or drinks^^;, but I do know my own; plain cheese pizza:P(especially stuffed crust -W-)for an evening meal, and my best drinks are Root Beer, Hi-C, Hawaiian Punch/Kool-Aid, and Fanta(orange)B-)Dessert(s)? Any sugary goodness I can have:thumbsup:(except for Cinnamon, Peanut Butter--other than Reese's Cups:shrug:--or Mint:bleh:)
:phew:Sorry to make it sound like a rant. On a serious note, though, words just cannot describe how BEAUTIFUL your work of art here is, and I know a lot of them!:D
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SnowWhiteQueen2000 Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love it!
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JECBrush Featured By Owner Sep 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks!
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therevolutioncat Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2013
Undescribably awesome!
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Serge-Salvatrice Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2012   Digital Artist
Miyu ..omg MIYU! This looks perfect to me. Everything mixes well. Your work always have atmosphere. The background is just as amazing too.
My stuff looks like the characters are copied and pasted onto the background...I don't know how to get that...feel/atmosphere for it to mix D:
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Annonymous-unknown Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
...I don't even know how to express this with regular words. The reflection of the flame on both glasses and Miyu's earring is excellent, and the reflections on the water are detailed enough to show distance and stillness in the water. Managing to make a linx look like an attractive woman is also very amazing.
Also, what program do you use to make these?
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Psychodoughgirl4 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow... this is beautiful.... just... wow..
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MikeyAnthroVulupin Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012
I wonder what their cuisine was.
Not fried Anglar, I hope. :iconyuckplz:
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emperorkirkwall Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Nice lighting :D
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Dekuscrub007 Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome.:)
well done.
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