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September 6, 2012
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A request for :iconshamedwolf:~shamedwolf of his fursona and my OC Nora together in an alternate-alternate Star Fox universe. The story here is pretty basic.

At first it was going to be pretty much the first panel, but I felt that my line art skills could use some sharpening, so I drew a bunch of sketches and pieced them together on this page. It eventually turned into an attempt to create this manga-like page. That's why it took a while to throw this out here.

I hope you like it! :)

Oh, please give constructive critiques based on overall composition and direction of the piece. I would like some help on improving page assembly.
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Critique by ~shamedwolf Sep 6, 2012, 6:33:25 PM
Dude it was a very awesomely put together manga strip make sure to continue it so I know what happens between me and Nora okay, add color too, overall it was epic there's no way anybody could've done a better job at this request of mine again keep up the comic so I can see how me and Nora turn out alright dude as you see I loved how you did this awesome comic strip you should try to do comic strips for newspapers dude as a side-job to your main job okay keep up the very awesome work okay dude?! ^_^
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~XxXSpainXxX Apr 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Aw! Poor Nora! :cry:
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*Serge-Salvatrice Oct 18, 2012   Digital Artist
Excellent composition. Has a very cool manga feel to it and very well done. Awesome work as usual
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Mood: Love ~Wolffang1995Hyano Oct 4, 2012
daaaaaaang O[]O this is so effin' boss!!!~ \(0w0)/
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~Lutherine Sep 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why serious ladies with command position are such cry-babies at times?
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=JECBrush Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
For Nora, it's the compounding stress bottled up inside and the death of a loved one to top it off.
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~Lutherine Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Poor lady.
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!UN4Ever Sep 14, 2012
And what's wrong with the critique system??? I can't see the deviation when I write a critique. :(

Oh Julius, this is page 13, so where's the other page???
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=JECBrush Sep 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You'd probably can get the attention of a dA admin in the Suggestions Forum and request a change in the critique system there.

The '13' in Page 13 is just an arbitrary number that was randomly chosen by a roll of a 20-sided dice. :P
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!UN4Ever Sep 20, 2012
20-sided dice ?? :O
My god.

Oh, I'll tell them about this little problem.

Thanx Julius :D
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Mood: Love *Emperorzeta Sep 10, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(Ahem) i'm not sure if i already said this but still a better love story than twilight.
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