A request for
of his fursona and my OC Nora together in an alternate-alternate Star Fox universe. The story here is pretty basic.
At first it was going to be pretty much the first panel, but I felt that my line art skills could use some sharpening, so I drew a bunch of sketches and pieced them together on this page. It eventually turned into an attempt to create this manga-like page. That's why it took a while to throw this out here.
I hope you like it!
Oh, please give constructive critiques based on overall composition and direction of the piece. I would like some help on improving page assembly.